loved how you have showed such a beautiful story about it pretty long but really interesting. but the one thing gave it away. it didn't make sense. but next time i hope you check the words of your story and you always have to recheck it over and over again. Phil taught us well too about recheck your words if your going to make everyone interested in it. have a wonderful day and keep up with the great work.
Kia Ora hi my name is Bella im from room 24 I really like your story about the boy and the wolf and his Experience. I definitely think you should go over t to check if it makes sense. if you would like to check out my blog here is the linkhttp://odsisabellap.blogspot.com/
Hi My name is Gina from RM 22. I like you blog post about (I don't know?). You didn't put a title or any writing on your post! But I do like your story about a family and a wolf. But next time you could tell us what your post is about and give it a title.
Kia Ora, my name is Deborah and i really liked your blog post about oxygen BFF wolf experience kumara.I think it would be fun to do that writing activity. Have you ever tried putting a short tittle and adding a picture/
thanks for sharing your learning experience with me you should check out my blog https://odsdeborah.blogspot.com/ blog you later
Hi My name is Ava im from Room 22 Owairaka School Great use of those words - really good writing. Next time you could try to use less capitals everywhere. Where did you find those words??? Blog you later Ava
Hi my name is Matilda from Room 22. I really liked your post about your story about a wolf. What is your favourite fairy tale? Mine is Cinderella because she eventually over threw her evil stepmother - with a bit of help. Blog you later, Matilda
NI Hao,my name is Maria in Room 23 at Owairaka District School.I really like your post about the wolf. What is your favorite fairy tale?? My one is little red ridding hold. Blog you later (Maria)
Hello Maria you have a pleasant comment I picked yours cause it have questions that I can answer but I don't have a fav fairy tale.... Im in rm25 I cant wait to check yours out blog ya lather....
Hi, Dekovyn I really liked your wolf story It was really good, make sure you do capital letters. Blog you later! Hey you should see my blog at https://odselig.blogspot.co.nz/
loved how you have showed such a beautiful story about it pretty long but really interesting. but the one thing gave it away. it didn't make sense. but next time i hope you check the words of your story and you always have to recheck it over and over again. Phil taught us well too about recheck your words if your going to make everyone interested in it. have a wonderful day and keep up with the great work.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora hi my name is Bella im from room 24
ReplyDeleteI really like your story about the boy and the wolf and his Experience.
I definitely think you should go over t to check if it makes sense.
if you would like to check out my blog here is the linkhttp://odsisabellap.blogspot.com/
Hi My name is Gina from RM 22.
ReplyDeleteI like you blog post about (I don't know?). You didn't put a title or any writing on your post! But I do like your story about a family and a wolf. But next time you could tell us what your post is about and give it a title.
Here is my blog: http://odsgina.blogspot.com/
Blog you later!
Gina
Kia Ora, my name is Deborah and i really liked your blog post about oxygen BFF wolf experience kumara.I think it would be fun to do that writing activity. Have you ever tried putting a short tittle and adding a picture/
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing your learning experience with me you should check out my blog
https://odsdeborah.blogspot.com/
blog you later
Hi My name is Ava im from Room 22 Owairaka School
ReplyDeleteGreat use of those words - really good writing.
Next time you could try to use less capitals everywhere.
Where did you find those words???
Blog you later
Ava
kia ora dekovun i liked your blog post about your word challenge have you ever thought about re reading your sentences
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Wow Dekovyn did't know you can be good at writing.But you do make spelling mistake.ether way great job dekovyn
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Matilda from Room 22.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post about your story about a wolf. What is your favourite fairy tale? Mine is Cinderella because she eventually over threw her evil stepmother - with a bit of help.
Blog you later, Matilda
NI Hao,my name is Maria in Room 23 at Owairaka District School.I really like your post about the wolf. What is your favorite fairy tale?? My one is little red ridding hold. Blog you later (Maria)
ReplyDeleteHello Maria you have a pleasant comment I picked yours cause it have questions that I can answer but I don't have a fav fairy tale.... Im in rm25 I cant wait to check yours out blog ya lather....
ReplyDeleteHi Dekovyn I really like your blog post about your story about a wolf. It was really nice but you might want to check your spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteBlog you later,
Jake
Hi, Dekovyn I really liked your wolf story It was really good, make sure you do capital letters. Blog you later! Hey you should see my blog at https://odselig.blogspot.co.nz/
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